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Fear of you:                                                          T
R                                                                         E
E       Your r                        Save Me                       E
E              e                                  F                      F
                 j                                 R
M             e                                  O                      Y
E            c                                    M                     M
             t                     Your o
               i                          b        M                      N
                o                          l       Y                      O
                 n                          i      S
                                         v         E                      K
Of this torturous existance         i       L                     C
                                             o     F                      A
                     Your i               u                              B
                           n             s      From what I feel
I'm running ->->    s  From you ->->->  ^                   E
                           i              n                               M
                          g                a
I                          h              t                              P
                            t            u                               L
A                                        r                               E
  M                           Your a   e                             H
                                       c
F                                       c          I'm praying
A                                     e                 And hoping
  L                                  p                       You
L                                   t                     Say yes
I                                     a
N                                     n
  G                                    c
                                       e

    Do you see how my eyes shine for you?
So this poem is a little chaotic... but that's kind of how I feel... I'm not sure what to think and am too shy and scared to act on my feelings... so... Yeah... POEMS!!! :P
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:iconramesure:
Ramesure Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011
I loved this.
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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:iconramesure:
Ramesure Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011
no problem
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:iconneko-me:
Neko-me Featured By Owner May 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very expressive! I think you've reached your goal: I see the emotions behind it and this form is amazing! :D
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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Neko-me Featured By Owner May 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! :hug:
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:icontunafish-tan:
Tunafish-tan Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, this is pretty cool, I like the way you wrote it! :'D
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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:icontunafish-tan:
Tunafish-tan Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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Istnir Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student General Artist
good good, not sure if its a concrete poem... it looks like there is a form to is :)
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