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Fear of you:                                                          T
R                                                                         E
E       Your r                        Save Me                       E
E              e                                  F                      F
                 j                                 R
M             e                                  O                      Y
E            c                                    M                     M
             t                     Your o
               i                          b        M                      N
                o                          l       Y                      O
                 n                          i      S
                                         v         E                      K
Of this torturous existance         i       L                     C
                                             o     F                      A
                     Your i               u                              B
                           n             s      From what I feel
I'm running ->->    s  From you ->->->  ^                   E
                           i              n                               M
                          g                a
I                          h              t                              P
                            t            u                               L
A                                        r                               E
  M                           Your a   e                             H
                                       c
F                                       c          I'm praying
A                                     e                 And hoping
  L                                  p                       You
L                                   t                     Say yes
I                                     a
N                                     n
  G                                    c
                                       e

    Do you see how my eyes shine for you?
So this poem is a little chaotic... but that's kind of how I feel... I'm not sure what to think and am too shy and scared to act on my feelings... so... Yeah... POEMS!!! :P
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:iconramesure:
Ramesure Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011
I loved this.
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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:iconramesure:
Ramesure Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011
no problem
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Neko-me Featured By Owner May 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very expressive! I think you've reached your goal: I see the emotions behind it and this form is amazing! :D
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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Neko-me Featured By Owner May 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! :hug:
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Tunafish-tan Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, this is pretty cool, I like the way you wrote it! :'D
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Tunafish-tan Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconistnir:
Istnir Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student General Artist
good good, not sure if its a concrete poem... it looks like there is a form to is :)
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah... I really don't know... I was writing on my whiteboard, and it was originally gonna just be a normal poem, but then I just started messing around...
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Istnir Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student General Artist
I like it :)
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconistnir:
Istnir Featured By Owner May 17, 2011  Student General Artist
np
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:iconso-far-from-sensible:
So-Far-From-Sensible Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student General Artist
Wow! This is amazing! The layout is so unique and I love the words :heart: :+fav:
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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:iconso-far-from-sensible:
So-Far-From-Sensible Featured By Owner May 17, 2011  Student General Artist
No prob!!
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:iconfozzymillow:
Fozzymillow Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student General Artist
Now that must have taken awhile for you to do XD
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha... Setting it up on DA, yes. Writing it, not so much...
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:iconfozzymillow:
Fozzymillow Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student General Artist
Been there, done that. Made a ship, actually XDD
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, wow, now THAT would be hard!
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xperimentallifeform Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the setup of this, it's like portraying the abstract concept of thought using only words. Kinda like what runs through the mind in those situations.
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, thanks!
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:iconsoul-reader:
Soul-Reader Featured By Owner May 16, 2011   Writer
Wow - this is very unique - but impressive!! :D
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Youreunwelcome Featured By Owner May 16, 2011
Wow...
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:iconregnaye4artist:
Regnaye4Artist Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
this is really trippy....I LOVE IT!!!!!
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, thanks!
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:iconregnaye4artist:
Regnaye4Artist Featured By Owner May 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
welcome
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NijaChan Featured By Owner May 15, 2011
ok missy u are gona have to txt me and give an explaination for this poem :p but i likes it! even though i had to read it lke 3 times to get what was goin on!!!!! :)
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No! NO EXPLANATIONS!!!!*hides* YOU'LL NEVER MAKE ME TALK!!!!!
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:iconnijachan:
NijaChan Featured By Owner May 24, 2011
*takes out a tack* OH YES I WILL!!!!!!!!!!! mawahahahahahahaha!!!!
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
*takes out my own tack* Do you really want to start this?
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:iconnijachan:
NijaChan Featured By Owner May 24, 2011
YES!!!!! let us dool!!!! lol!!!! :) *takes out machetti* mawahahaha!!
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
*takes out dual swoards* YOU'RE ON!
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:iconnijachan:
NijaChan Featured By Owner May 24, 2011
*stunned* *blinks* soooo we're playing like that are we? well then take this!! *pulls canyon out of pocket*
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yeah? *pulls out a tank* What now?
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:iconmtgril12:
mtgril12 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Student General Artist
WOW! this is amazing ! i wish i could do that XP
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, thanks :)
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GingerxRose Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so amazing! I love the way you pieced it all together to tell a story
Brilliant!
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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crazyBookworm013 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow
that was quite interesting
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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crazyBookworm013 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
oh no problem
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:iconlichodite:
lichodite Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting...
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:iconmaraqua90210:
maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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Skull-Killer Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I really like the style and how you did it. I think if you read everything you can kinda peice together what you are saying. Nice job.
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maraqua90210 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Yeah... I originally wrote this on my whiteboard in my room XP
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Skull-Killer Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That would be really cool. XD
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